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There's a place...

many_names_is_me: Number of posts : 11
Age : 29
Registration date : 2009-02-17

Post n°1

There's a place...

many_names_is_me October 3rd 2009, 7:32 am

There's a place I want to go,
Another place, far from home.
Where the soft sun shines through the green leafed trees
Where the butterflies sing their sweet melodies
Where I can live life without a care
Where the tigers can play in my lodging there
There has always been a place in my heart, in my dreams
A place that is perfect, perfect for me.

I'm an illusion

I'm an illusion: Number of posts : 59
Age : 32
Location : Rushing ahead but glancing behind
Humor : None.
Registration date : 2009-02-21

Post n°2

Re: There's a place...

I'm an illusion October 29th 2009, 7:20 pm

I like this poem. Smile

The contrast between the tigers and the butterflies calls more attention to their presence, if that makes any sense. It makes me really stop and picture the scene you're describing.