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Sappy Love Poem #153

speshalmon: Number of posts : 19
Age : 30
Humor : Drastically dark and witty
Registration date : 2010-11-20

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Sappy Love Poem #153

speshalmon May 6th 2011, 6:01 pm

Everything I see is beautiful,
all I see is you.
Maybe I'm delusional,
but I want to see this through.
Your haunting face in my dreams,
but a dream is all it seems.
Sweeping me off my feet is as
deep as all we knew.
I would do anything for
you to feel this too.
I love you.

What'sHerFace

What'sHerFace: Scribe; Number of posts : 10
Age : 29
Location : under your bed
Registration date : 2009-09-11

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Re: Sappy Love Poem #153

What'sHerFace May 15th 2011, 3:02 pm

Very very nice Very Happy

My favorite part is...

"Everything I see is beautiful,
all I see is you."

...because it really speaks. Gorgeous.

I keep rereading it. It gets better every time I do Very Happy

Oh, and I'd LOVE to read the 152 other poems that you have. Wink

speshalmon

speshalmon: Number of posts : 19
Age : 30
Humor : Drastically dark and witty
Registration date : 2010-11-20

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Re: Sappy Love Poem #153

speshalmon May 15th 2011, 10:50 pm

What'sHerFace wrote:Very very nice
Oh, and I'd LOVE to read the 152 other poems that you have.

Well, it was more sarcasm to myself because it seems to be all I write and most are still in the embryonic stages in my various notebooks, but I wouldn't doubt there to be 152 others. Smile