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The eggs were broken and scrambled all over the pavement

"Oh, not again!" A woman said from another the room.

"One of these days we've got to finish building the walls to this house!" exclaimed Frank

He had a point; besides weather problems, annoying neighbors could walk through the living room whenever they felt like it.

But he knew deep down that it was his fault for not having the walls up sooner.

But the breeze from the lack of walls is so nice...

It reminds me very much of my old home, before we had to move here.

It was a horrible place in a land called Canada, if I remember correctly. Horrid place.

The only good thing about it was that people on the streets would sometimes randomly break out into Very Potter musical moments, singing, "That's in Canada!!"

Before we left, I was utterly annoyed by thier random screaming, now I kinda missed them...

Even though it kept me awake, you come to love thing you hate I guess.

Which brought me to think of another thing I hate about this new place.

Living next to the rhinoceros farm and above the main sewage line of the city.

It was in this spot...this combination of elements...that the superhero known Rhino-man was created... *epic musical score*

Ohhh! How Frank despised Rino-man with a burning passion!

An angry passion that he could remember as long as he could.

And why shouldnt he despise him?

He was the reason he could never keep his walls up, always knocking them down during his rampages. And that's how when he dropped his eggs they ended up on the pavement.

This looks like it could be a potentially good stopping point - having come back to the beginning of the story. So 2 more posts, so Kenzie and I can both have another and that should even us out. Then let's go back and read it!

My next contribution:

For some inexplicable reason, the eggs breaking made him very emotional. Falling to his knees on the sidewalk, he looked up to the sky and cried out... (all yours, kenzie :])

"OHHH CANADA!!!!!"

~fin

The eggs were broken and scrambled all over the pavement
"Oh, not again!" A woman said from another the room.
"One of these days we've got to finish building the walls to this house!" exclaimed Frank
He had a point; besides weather problems, annoying neighbors could walk through the living room whenever they felt like it.
But he knew deep down that it was his fault for not having the walls up sooner.
But the breeze from the lack of walls is so nice...
It reminds me very much of my old home, before we had to move here.
It was a horrible place in a land called Canada, if I remember correctly. Horrid place.
The only good thing about it was that people on the streets would sometimes randomly break out into Very Potter musical moments, singing, "That's in Canada!!"
Before we left, I was utterly annoyed by thier random screaming, now I kinda missed them...
Even though it kept me awake, you come to love thing you hate I guess.
Which brought me to think of another thing I hate about this new place.
Living next to the rhinoceros farm and above the main sewage line of the city.
It was in this spot...this combination of elements...that the superhero known Rhino-man was created... *epic musical score*
Ohhh! How Frank despised Rino-man with a burning passion!
An angry passion that he could remember as long as he could.
And why shouldnt he despise him?
He was the reason he could never keep his walls up, always knocking them down during his rampages. And that's how when he dropped his eggs they ended up on the pavement.
For some inexplicable reason, the eggs breaking made him very emotional. Falling to his knees on the sidewalk, he looked up to the sky and cried out...
"OHHH CANADA!!!!!"

lol are you kidding? I just finished doing this exact same thing, you beat me to it

Thanks!

Sweet

Short story of the year I would say!

It should be in the school paper!