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    Post  drasticDreamer February 17th 2009, 10:22 pm

    Mis poemas... My artistic creations.

    I haven't written much, if any, lately. It's all rather sad and unfortunate. But I shall keep trying! So here are some tidbits.

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    Post  drasticDreamer February 17th 2009, 10:26 pm


    Tumblers are spinning
    A combination turned
    It's not about winning
    That's a lesson learned
    Sage advice given far and near
    Wise words are spoken
    It's not what you say but hear
    That's a promise not broken
    The knot is tied
    Each deed is done
    It's not to be cried
    That's all burnt by the sun
    A lock is clicked
    The numbers are picked
    A message revealed
    For all to yield.
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    Post  drasticDreamer February 18th 2009, 8:51 pm




    Crystal fashioned in one piece,
    A delicate balance of peace,
    Used for many different acts,
    Wield more carefully than an ax,
    Could be rimmed in gilt,
    Liable to arouse more guilt,
    Careful lest it cause an err,
    Tension thicker than the air,
    Lest the grip become lax,
    Know in what it lacks,
    May create an elegant pane,
    If it breaks, then comes pain.
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    I'm an illusion
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    Post  I'm an illusion February 21st 2009, 8:58 am

    Haha, so it took me a while to realize what was going on in the last one...the crystal heart poem? I was thinking the rhyme scheme was funny and I read back over it and was like, "DUH!" Cos it rhymes but not really. The same pronunciation but different spelling, different meaning...Haha, that's great Kyle. ;~}
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    Post  The Liar February 21st 2009, 6:06 pm

    I believe the term you want is homophones. Yea, I liked that one too.
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    Post  drasticDreamer February 21st 2009, 9:17 pm

    Anything else other than commenting on the fact that the lines ended in homophones/homonyms? I love you
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    Post  MagicalMelody February 23rd 2009, 6:51 pm

    I think that the Fortune Cookie is one of the worse ones that you wrote. I don't really like it...you have many better poems than this one!!
    JUST KIDDING! jocolor I think it's really good...I like the idea and I think it flows really well! Good job Kyle Marie! I love you
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    Post  drasticDreamer September 13th 2009, 10:29 am




    Bleary eyes,
    Tired sighs,
    Bowed head,
    Wanting bed,
    Pillow dreams,
    Yawning teams,
    Unfocused mind,
    What a bind.

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    Post  drasticDreamer September 13th 2009, 10:30 am

    MY FIRST POEM IN SEVEN MONTHS!!!!!!
    Wow, that's AWFUL...
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    Post  i<3edwardcullen September 13th 2009, 3:21 pm

    ABOUT TIME!!!! drasticPoems Icon_tongue
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    Post  I'm an illusion September 13th 2009, 8:50 pm

    I like it!!! The lines are so concise and poignant. Smile Very cute. Me gusta.

    Oh, and *applause*. KYLE WROTE!!!! drasticPoems Icon_cheers
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    Post  drasticDreamer September 15th 2009, 3:49 pm

    There have been many comments about the distinct lack of "happy" poetry.

    ...Christina attempted to rectify that the other day whilst at school. She inspired me.

    Here are my attempts at happy poems! Please, do not get discouraged. =P It's not as bad as it looks! Promise! *giggle*
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    Post  drasticDreamer September 15th 2009, 3:51 pm

    See the puppy run 'cross the street
    Tripping, tumbling under feet
    Hear the honking horn
    Eyes flashing he stands torn
    Which way to turn, to run
    Beneath the glaring light of sun
    Squealing wheels
    Heartwrenching peals
    A scream, a shout
    The light went out.
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    Post  drasticDreamer September 15th 2009, 3:52 pm

    Apparently some are unable to see the happy point of this... The puppy went to HEAVEN!!!!

    In order to clarify this... I wrote two alternate endings... I will post them next.
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    Post  drasticDreamer September 15th 2009, 3:54 pm

    See the puppy run 'cross the street
    Tripping, tumbling under feet
    Hear the honking horn
    Eyes flashing he stands torn
    Which way to turn, to run
    Beneath the glaring light of sun
    Squealing wheels
    Heartwrenching peals
    A scream, a shout
    The light went out.
    Hands reach down to pick him up
    The mourning begins for the little pup
    Up to heaven he will fly
    As tears fall, for time goes by.
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    Post  drasticDreamer September 15th 2009, 3:55 pm

    See the puppy run 'cross the street
    Tripping, tumbling under feet
    Hear the honking horn
    Eyes flashing he stands torn
    Which way to turn, to run
    Beneath the glaring light of sun
    Squealing wheels
    Heartwrenching peals
    A scream, a shout
    The light went out.
    They take him over to see the vet
    But come home with a new pet
    A little puppy with bright eyes
    One who never ever dies.
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    Post  drasticDreamer September 15th 2009, 3:56 pm

    See? They ARE happy! Right?

    (Anyway... I have to leave... I'll post up the other two poems in a bit...AND the EDITED First Happy Poem. =P)


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    Post  drasticDreamer September 15th 2009, 9:47 pm

    So the puppy didn't run across the street
    Didn't trip or tumble under feet
    There was no honking horn
    No eyes were flashing torn
    He didn't have to turn and run
    Not beneath the glaring sun
    No squealing wheels
    No heartwrenching peals
    No scream, no shout
    And the light definetly did not go out!
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    Post  drasticDreamer September 15th 2009, 9:50 pm

    Whistle lightly, sing for song
    Prancing, skipping all day long
    Words of joy and happiness
    More than just sappiness
    Full of meaning and of life
    So much better than groans of strife
    Bright eyes and joyful smiles
    Gladness to flow for many miles.
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    Post  drasticDreamer September 15th 2009, 9:52 pm

    The joys of Christmas seasons
    Ringing bells
    Songs of angels
    Children smiling
    Smell of spruce
    David's star
    Manger scenes
    Donkeys and lambs
    Sparkling ornaments
    Nostalgic tunes
    Whispered promises
    Shiny presents
    Welcoming embraces
    Brightened eyes
    Comforting family
    Cookies and candies
    Laughing friends
    Joy of Jesus...
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    Post  drasticDreamer September 19th 2009, 1:08 pm

    I’ve been running
    In circles
    I don’t know where
    I am
    I’ve been running
    In circles
    I don’t know where
    You are
    Let’s stop running
    Come meet me in the middle
    Where the circles are tangent
    We must stop running
    Circles go on and on and on
    And never end
    I’ve been running
    In circles
    I don’t know where
    I am
    I’ve been running
    In circles
    I don’t know where
    You are
    When we were young
    Our mother’s said
    When you’re lost
    Stand still
    Someone will find you
    I’ll stop running
    Cuz
    I’ve been running
    In circles
    I don’t know where
    I am
    I’ve been running
    In circles
    I don’t know where
    You are
    So please come find me.
    Summer 2009
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    Post  i<3edwardcullen September 19th 2009, 11:12 pm

    awww....i really this one....
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    Post  I'm an illusion September 20th 2009, 3:07 pm

    Wow...First of all, I love how you wrote a Christmas poem in September. Smile Christmas is awesome, though, and inherently happy. YAY for the Christmas poem!

    I also like the really cutesy-rhyming sing-song one, and I still can't see the happy in the puppy poem. I like it! I'm happy that you wrote! That's the happy I see. ;~}

    But anyway, yeah, this circles poem? I like it a lot. It's really well done. The poem itself seems to have a circular motion, how you bring back that motif and even the meter of the motif. Yes. I like it.
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    Post  drasticDreamer September 21st 2009, 3:44 pm

    Thank you!! Embarassed
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