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    Someone Else

    MagicalMelody
    MagicalMelody


    Number of posts : 8
    Age : 31
    Registration date : 2009-02-16

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    Post  MagicalMelody February 22nd 2009, 1:35 am

    You try to listen but you don't hear
    That all I say is sincere.
    You try to watch but you don't see
    How much I want you to be with me.
    You try to touch but you don't feel
    The wound on my heart will never heal.
    You try to hear but you don't listen,
    You never notice how my eyes glisten.
    You try to see but you don't watch
    How I try to move up a notch.
    You try to feel but you don't touch,
    You don't pay attention to me that much.
    You have a good time living your life
    While my heart is under the knife.
    You try to be sweet but you don't have to,
    You are real and always true.
    I want you to see how I think of you
    But you don't care no matter what I do.
    I need to try and forget your smile
    Even if it takes a while.
    I know it is the right thing to do
    Even if I know I care about you.
    But I also know what my mind tells,
    Your heart is beating for someone else.
    So I'll put my head down and leave
    And I'll stop being naive.
    I will wipe off my tears
    And live alone my future years.
    MagicalMelody
    MagicalMelody


    Number of posts : 8
    Age : 31
    Registration date : 2009-02-16

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    Post  MagicalMelody February 22nd 2009, 1:40 am

    I just wrote this poem few minutes ago...didn't really have to think about it... Yep....kind of how I feel right now but I'm most definitely okay! cherry Not sad or depressed or anything! Life's Good!
    I'm an illusion
    I'm an illusion


    Number of posts : 59
    Age : 32
    Location : Rushing ahead but glancing behind
    Humor : None.
    Registration date : 2009-02-21

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    Post  I'm an illusion February 23rd 2009, 6:30 pm

    Aw, Beata! Sad poem...

    It's really pretty, though. Very deep. Razz
    MagicalMelody
    MagicalMelody


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    Age : 31
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    Post  MagicalMelody February 23rd 2009, 6:47 pm

    Yep...very sad...... clown ......and deep...well, I don't know about that one but I tried Razz
    I'm an illusion
    I'm an illusion


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    Post  I'm an illusion February 23rd 2009, 6:50 pm

    It's DEFINITELY deep. ;~}

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