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    Rimas

    I'm an illusion
    I'm an illusion


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    Post  I'm an illusion February 23rd 2009, 7:03 pm

    Uh...these are mine...and I'm posting them here. ;~}
    I'm an illusion
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    Post  I'm an illusion February 23rd 2009, 7:04 pm

    Frustration, irritation,
    But mostly just the raw sensation,
    That the world around is shifting.
    Am I anchored down or drifting?
    Colors are fading, rearranging.
    Nothing's new, but all are changing.
    Fear and anger, imagined danger.
    Look up. You're holding hands with strangers.
    I'm an illusion
    I'm an illusion


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    Post  I'm an illusion February 23rd 2009, 7:15 pm

    The dream you had last night
    That shook you to the core,
    Awoke you at two a.m.,
    That left you in a cold sweat,
    That you keep trying to brush off
    As nothing.

    The shadow that hangs over you,
    As you hastily eat breakfast,
    Search the house for your shoes,
    As you brush your teeth,
    As you gather your scattered belongings;
    Your purse, your cell, your keys.

    The sinking feeling in your heart,
    As you pull the door shut,
    Without a backwards glance,
    As you yell over your shoulder
    As you do everyday, that mundane word:
    “Goodbye.”
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    Post  drasticDreamer February 24th 2009, 8:42 pm

    "Goodbye". Wow. That makes it awfully tragic, Nina!! Crying or Very sad
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    Post  MagicalMelody February 24th 2009, 9:13 pm

    It reminds me of that one movie..."Premonition"...I really like it Like a Star @ heaven !! It has a really dark tone kind of thing...it's scary tongue .
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    Post  I'm an illusion February 28th 2009, 12:08 pm

    Haha, I hadn't written a poem in soooo long...I was just in the mood for it. So...I wrote that one. Yup yup.

    I started with the title, which is unusual for me...I usually have trouble titling poems, but I gave this poem a name before I ever wrote it. ;~} Weird, huh? And fitting.
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    Post  I'm an illusion May 25th 2009, 1:44 pm

    I think it's time I wrote again...anybody have any ideas?
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    Post  drasticDreamer June 4th 2009, 8:53 pm

    A poem! What about? No idea!

    (Psst...Was I helpful? =P)

    <3
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    Post  I'm an illusion June 5th 2009, 7:56 pm

    Haha, yes, Kyle, you were ever-so-helpful.

    I haven't written anything in FOREVER!!!

    Maybe I can dig out some old stuff that I don't think I've shared...
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    Post  I'm an illusion August 30th 2009, 6:05 pm

    Kay, this isn't that good. It'd be better in song form, but...anyway...

    I wouldn't call it chasing,
    Cos you were here.
    I am just doing my best
    To keep you near.

    I wouldn't call it desperate.
    At least, not yet.
    You can't tell, but I swear I
    Try not to beg.

    I wouldn't call it hatred.
    I still care.
    I even think there's still some
    Fond mem'ries there.

    I wouldn't call them nightmares,
    But I can't sleep.
    Now reality is much
    Worse than my dreams.

    You said you love me, promised
    You'd never leave.
    I guess you've said a lot of
    Things in your life.

    I remember saying I
    Could not believe.
    But I guess my heart did not
    Consult my mind.

    If you say goodbye again tonight,
    I think I will believe you this time.


    And I'll work on writing something happy to post here. I promise you, I'm really a very happy person. You wouldn't believe what a good mood I was in when I wrote this. Smile
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    Post  drasticDreamer August 30th 2009, 9:48 pm

    And in the shower, right? Razz

    Haha, but I like it. I do! I really do. =)
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    Post  I'm an illusion August 30th 2009, 10:30 pm

    Yup, in the shower. My best inspiration comes when I don't have access to paper. Smile It never fails.
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    Post  drasticDreamer August 31st 2009, 4:00 pm

    Hmmm, I know what you mean. I compose poems as I fall asleep. (You know what? I never remember them in the morning. *sigh*) Keep on writing!
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    Post  I'm an illusion November 5th 2009, 9:02 pm

    I must not think in English.
    For if I did, shouldn't I,
    Be able to translate the
    Words of my head to paper?

    I must not finish my thoughts
    Before I attempt to spell
    Them out. For the product is,
    Always so weak, watered down.

    I must not think in words,
    For sometimes I flounder.
    No words fully express
    All that I mean to say.

    I must not think concretely,
    For sometimes I can't pin down
    The fleeting images or
    Ideas that slip right by.

    I must not think. I feel.
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    The President
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    Post  President November 26th 2009, 7:26 pm

    Have you entered any poetry contests? You should.
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    Post  I'm an illusion December 27th 2009, 4:32 pm

    Yeah, I have. But my stuff really isn't that good.

    So, here's something new-ish, that was once again meant more as a song than a poem, but whatever, right?



    You've been hurt and you have hurt and you don't know who to blame.
    You know that it's not all your fault, still you hang your head in shame.
    Maybe you'd keep your promises if others were as true.
    Maybe there'd be something left of you.

    Is anything sacred anymore?
    Your past is a scar you can not ignore.
    Your fears will confront you as they have before.
    Is anything sacred anymore?

    You gave your heart and you lost your voice. Who would want you now?
    You try to take another's place to redeem yourself somehow.
    Maybe you wouldn't be so cruel if you could stand yourself.
    Maybe then you could reach out for help.

    Is anything sacred anymore?
    Your past is a scar you can not ignore.
    Your fears will confront you as they have before.
    Is anything sacred anymore?

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